When I read this story, I think this is quite interesting because in this story is told there is a child named Sean. She loves to eat. He loves cookies, meat, fruit and much more. One day he went to Leo's birthday party. At the end of the show Sean got the first piece of cake that was brought by Leo's mother. Suddenly sean run and this is not usually sean avoid food. Leo asked Sean why he ran out and avoided the food. Inside this story it is explained that the cake turns blue and it is not a cake. I do not think this story ending and make the reader confused because it is not explained that it is a cake or not. He should restore the conflict on the story so readers are interested to read it.
By: siska amel
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